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| meadow567 2008-07-20 ch 13, | abuseTabloids. Gotta love em, gotta hate em. |
| demolished-soul 2008-07-19 ch 13, | abuseDun dun dun... and the plot thickens. I think that about sums up the topic of this chapter. I'm glad the story's moving along because now it's getting a lot more interesting. Waiting on more! |
| Forest Angel 2008-07-17 ch 13, | abuseI can sympathise with the real life interruptions! Looking forward to how this continues and the repercussions from Taylor and Carmen's headline news. |
| Madison Bellows 2008-07-17 ch 13, | abuseYea, y'all are back! *happy dance* And what a way to come back! I am so ready for the next chapter, even though I know it may take a while. Why can't we all just become independently wealthy and sit around a write all day? Happy writing until next time! |
| laplandgurl 2008-07-17 ch 13, | abuseHey welcome back ladies - so glad that RL has let you all out of its evil cluthes to get together for another chapter...you have me hanging on the edge of my seat here...I am so dying of curiousity here - so needless to say...I am looking forward to the next chapter here... And taking a page out of BEG75's book here - shameless plug here - have you checked out Don't cry for me over on the CSI LV site and Pixie on the Miami site yet... Until the next chapter...happy writing on all your various stories... |
| The Corrupter 2008-04-27 ch 12, | abusei feel for cory at this point - not being able to see ghosts. Guess i feel for tay too because seh's alone in this so the bad guys are vspa - they sound evil! i'm sure theyre gonna be a fair enough match for the team! if they can trash two apartments and put flack in hospital, im almost scared as to what else they can cook up - but i'm sure the team will save the day. don't leave me waiting for more too long |
| The Corrupter 2008-04-27 ch 11, | abusehang on - back u[p a chapter - is that a tay/marty pairing, or a tay/angell pairing? poor tay, not being able to remember it, either way! |
| The Corrupter 2008-04-27 ch 10, | abusefor the record, taylor isn't a horrible person. I don't think i like carmen. sorry. i am likeing cory mor anf more though. she strikes me as someone who would be a good match for mac, but then again i think there personalities would clash. and i mean that in a nice way. but danny needs someone so maybe! |
| The Corrupter 2008-04-27 ch 9, | abusethat was the coolest fight i've ever read! it's a shame cory had to pull them apart because i would have liked to see taylor kick carmans butt - serves her right for taking flack |
| The Corrupter 2008-04-27 ch 8, | abusei'm still holding out that your gonna but taylor and flack back together because they belong together. fact. (sorry carmen, but it's true!) poor tay is all confused - who are ya gonna pair her up with then? or do i have to wait? i liked the date - croy's i mean. she seems nice. bit bossy, but she is a fed so i guess its needed! |
| laplandgurl 2008-04-14 ch 12, | abuseOh no - another evil cliffhanger - and grr to evil RL although that's what pays the bills. |
| JoanneF 2008-04-14 ch 12, | abusehmm...I wonder what Taylor is up to... I'm liking this case and mystery... I feel bad for Don/Carmen and hope that they can try to work it out since I like the two of them together. I have faith that Carmen & Taylor can still remain friends, though. The girls are great together. I like the friendship between them. :) |
| demolished-soul 2008-04-13 ch 12, | abuseOh man, Taylor, Flack and Carmen need to figure their stuff out! This whole drama between them is causing friendships to be torn. I hope that'll be figured out soon. |
| meadow567 2008-04-13 ch 12, | abuseWas Cory the only one around at the end? I would love it if someone who saw ghosts was around and did that. |
| JoanneF 2008-04-10 ch 11, | abuseYay, love the updates! Carmen's attack caught me by surprise and hope that everything will be fine with her, as well as everyone else. Can't wait to find out who's responsible for all of this mayhem & those break-in's. Great job you guys! |