argh! poor donna!

great fic

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Gah! that was riveting!

I have goosebumps...very well done. I liked it.

As always a class story! a great "what if?" situation. I really liked it! the whole screaming thing and the homeless guy screaming etc, really cleverly done!

Oh God, the terror Donna felt. well written.

What an interesting premise, and a fabulous execution to boot. Very well-written and suspenseful. Keep writing!