I really liked this one shot,even if Wufei and Heero are a little bit too cold-hearted in my opinion, I really like the way you described Quatre, Duo and especially Trowa. Thank you for this good moment !

So sweet. ^_^ Yay 3x4. You nearly gave me a heart attack, I seriously thought you were gonna kill of Quatre! But you didn't so...thank goodness. Great job for your first!

~ Val

This being your first, I hope you continue to write GW fics (3x4 please!).
Maybe it can't be placed at a pointed time in the series, but it surely gives the idea of it happening in the line.
I didn't detect any errors, it was quite easy to read, well structured. English isn't my first language either, but I can tell.
So congrats on writing. Hope to read more of your works later on.

Great story writing. I almost thought Quatre wouldn't make it. And I'm glad Trowa is finally thinking of his relationship with him. Maybe you should write a sequel, maybe a short fic describing what happened after the war so that we'll know whether Trowa has come to terms with his feelings.