That was freakin awesome! It was an amazing story and I think you did great! Kudos to you!

This is freakin awesome! Update soon please! I cant live long periods of time without this!

Holy crap i thought he was going to betray her!! YAY THEY ARE WORKING TOGETHER! LOVE THIS STORY GUYS U ALL ROCK@!@!!@ beth and lara would make a good team in a real game !! but i felt wierd when he called her "chest" cuz it makes me feel like she has no but but she has a great but :I oh well haha

Holy crap ! your hands are magical! this is one of the best stories ive read so far. i cant stop reading except for when i fulfill my human needs (eating sleeping etc) ^_^ your very lucky to be so talented dude . or girl haha write more stories wile i finish this amazing fic ^_^

yOUR STORIES ARTE AWSOME
they really sound like lara croft
i was gunna say the hands are dans but thats to obvious
haha
gj

this is good. I'll keep reading this. :)

oh nice twist at the end ! I spent the chapter, thinking "what ? how dare that Beth betray Lara ? she'll get them all killed, grr, how stupid is she ?" and so on... ^^ but it was all prepared... hm, I like falling in traps: it means the writting is good :)

oh ! I hope I will find enough free time to read it soon as it's really good :) Your descriptions are clear and it's easy to picture the scene : it's one of the main difficulties in writting -I guess you already know it from experience ;) - so, bravo !

hey ! Maybe I should wait and read more before reviewing but, the way the prologue is written and the story is told is enough for me to feel like going on reading...
More comments to come as I read :)

Ha! You blackmailer. Nice chapter. Definately did not expect that last part. I want to know how Laura reacts so please hurry up!

As an avid fan of TR, I must declare that this is a very well written story! I am looking forward to future chapters! ¡Gracias para la historia interesante!