|Reviews for Beyond|
| lostatc 9/27/07 . chapter 1
| clclemmons 9/13/07 . chapter 1
This is beautiful, love John watching over his boys, and them sensing him with them.
| sammygirl1963 9/12/07 . chapter 1
I like the fact that even tho John was in hell, he was able to allow his presence to be with his boys and watch over them and take care of them in some small way. That even tho he was suffering unimaginable horror, he was at the same time being comforted by being able to see and watch over his boys!
| Supernoodle 9/12/07 . chapter 1
Yay, I'm the first to review.
Love this story, it's so touching... Love the bit where Dean reaches out for his dad in his sleep:
he sees Dean frown, notices the hand twitch ever so slightly, as if wanting to reach out and grasp his father, but not wanting anyone to know this desire. It pulls at John's heart, for it is so like Dean, this want for comfort and the fear that if he asks for it, it will be taken away out of his reach.
Very moving, very sweet. John's a crafty, hard-core bugger, finding away to defy the devil to be with his boys - to hell (literally) with the consequences. People are so hard on John, he was never the most loveable character, but he did love his sons fiercely, gave his life to keep them safe and now he's suffering the ultimate torment just to be with them.
Love the hint of Mary too... You think she's out there, somewhere, waiting for them?
You are such a good writer, keep up the good work. Cookies for you!