 hypercell 2009-11-29 . chapter 7This chapter sounded like Rosalie. You got her on the mark |
 MissAnoni 2009-11-22 . chapter 9OMG! I almost forgot to review! I'm reading Edward's last because I wanted it to be the final chapter. Really good ending by the way. 'Alice can't see the werewolves.' Spooky.
Nice work! |
 Fleur24 2009-11-02 . chapter 10This was completely fascinqting! I loved reading all of their opinions! |
 Indigo1100 2009-10-25 . chapter 10Nice. There's a lot in them, especially for something so short. I like how Edward's ends, all ominous. And Rosalie's is just like 'oh, Rosalie'. And Emmett watching, and Esme remembering... Thank you for your story. |
 1853kaz 2009-10-24 . chapter 10Insight with depth. All in character. Well done.. :) |
 Mysterious Soula 2009-10-11 . chapter 10Wow, I had to read all the chapters before I made this comment. But that was really powerful. You captured the character's so well, and the emotion behind all of the things they said was so sincere. Also great job on making each chapter different, at first I was worried it might be too similar but you were able to make it your own with each persons perspective. Awesome, really awesome. |
 fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night 2009-09-29 . chapter 10awe that so sad |
 Katharine 2009-09-24 . chapter 10 Fabulous! Excellent look at each POV. Would love to see a similar POV from Renee, Victoria (though I don't know how you'd do that...), and Aro. |
 Mimigrace 2009-09-12 . chapter 8so far i like emmetts pov best. you've put the most thought into his in my opinion.
With the rest its just a generic 'why', but emmett really sees a lot more than he's given credit for.
Great story. |
 ImWithTheOtherCrazyGuys 2009-09-05 . chapter 10You really have a way of looking at things from a different way I wouldnt never thought of!! Even though its really de[ressing tis really interesting as well seeing th way you think they would think, Especially Jacoob thinking maybe it would've been better to let her go :( |
 ImWithTheOtherCrazyGuys 2009-09-05 . chapter 9God Edward is desparate!! Its really depressing to read!! |
 ImWithTheOtherCrazyGuys 2009-09-05 . chapter 8They way your writing it, it seems she didnt recover straight away when Edward came back. I guess no one really could but its weird looking in from a different persective :/ |
 ImWithTheOtherCrazyGuys 2009-09-05 . chapter 7Wow Rosline mean! |
 ImWithTheOtherCrazyGuys 2009-09-05 . chapter 5This is so sad.. I'm guessing this is pre Breaking Dawn? Some time around Eclipse? :/ |
 ImWithTheOtherCrazyGuys 2009-09-05 . chapter 4This unbelievably good!! So sad.. makes you think that she might have been thinking sucide as well :( |