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hypercell
2009-11-29 . chapter 7
This chapter sounded like Rosalie. You got her on the mark
MissAnoni
2009-11-22 . chapter 9
OMG! I almost forgot to review! I'm reading Edward's last because I wanted it to be the final chapter. Really good ending by the way. 'Alice can't see the werewolves.' Spooky.
Nice work!
Fleur24
2009-11-02 . chapter 10
This was completely fascinqting! I loved reading all of their opinions!
Indigo1100
2009-10-25 . chapter 10
Nice. There's a lot in them, especially for something so short. I like how Edward's ends, all ominous. And Rosalie's is just like 'oh, Rosalie'. And Emmett watching, and Esme remembering... Thank you for your story.
1853kaz
2009-10-24 . chapter 10
Insight with depth. All in character. Well done.. :)
Mysterious Soula
2009-10-11 . chapter 10
Wow, I had to read all the chapters before I made this comment. But that was really powerful. You captured the character's so well, and the emotion behind all of the things they said was so sincere. Also great job on making each chapter different, at first I was worried it might be too similar but you were able to make it your own with each persons perspective. Awesome, really awesome.
fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night
2009-09-29 . chapter 10
awe that so sad
Katharine
2009-09-24 . chapter 10
Fabulous! Excellent look at each POV. Would love to see a similar POV from Renee, Victoria (though I don't know how you'd do that...), and Aro.
Mimigrace
2009-09-12 . chapter 8
so far i like emmetts pov best. you've put the most thought into his in my opinion.
With the rest its just a generic 'why', but emmett really sees a lot more than he's given credit for.

Great story.
ImWithTheOtherCrazyGuys
2009-09-05 . chapter 10
You really have a way of looking at things from a different way I wouldnt never thought of!! Even though its really de[ressing tis really interesting as well seeing th way you think they would think, Especially Jacoob thinking maybe it would've been better to let her go :(
ImWithTheOtherCrazyGuys
2009-09-05 . chapter 9
God Edward is desparate!! Its really depressing to read!!
ImWithTheOtherCrazyGuys
2009-09-05 . chapter 8
They way your writing it, it seems she didnt recover straight away when Edward came back. I guess no one really could but its weird looking in from a different persective :/
ImWithTheOtherCrazyGuys
2009-09-05 . chapter 7
Wow Rosline mean!
ImWithTheOtherCrazyGuys
2009-09-05 . chapter 5
This is so sad.. I'm guessing this is pre Breaking Dawn? Some time around Eclipse? :/
ImWithTheOtherCrazyGuys
2009-09-05 . chapter 4
This unbelievably good!! So sad.. makes you think that she might have been thinking sucide as well :(
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