|Reviews for Love|
| Auteur-Onirique 2/14/10 . chapter 2
Well.. You know how to stop in good moments !
Even if I saw the movie a thousand of times, I'm really waiting for the next cahpter ! )
| Auteur-Onirique 2/14/10 . chapter 1
It's really my favourite character from Gladiator ! I've rarely seen a charachter with so much deep and so mysterious )
(excuse me from my spelling mistakes, I'm actually French, I can read english, but not really write it)
I however enjoyed reading your fic !
| Sepsis 10/23/09 . chapter 2
nice..:) well done.
| z.darko 7/27/09 . chapter 2
Wow.. I really loved that!
I love how you show how misunderstood commodus is and how he craves love and acceptance like everyone else.. 10/10 :)
| TragicGuardian 7/7/08 . chapter 1
Nice story I liked it
you write well
Turn it in into a full length story like you said!
| SamanthaMae 1/3/08 . chapter 1
I can't really describe how great this was without sounding completely cheesy. But I loved it! Most people see Commodus as the incest villan bastard, but I truely think he was just...misunderstood, like you said. And I'm not just saying that 'cause Joaquin Phoenix is hot as hell (although that sometimes helps:) )
There were a few grammar mistakes I noticed, like when you used dialouge, i.e.: “Brother, I have been looking for you”. should be "Brother,, I have been looking for you."
The punctuation mark should be in the quotation mark at all times.
"“Yes I will come” she replied, waking me from my thoughts." should be "Yes, I will come," she replied...
There is always a puctuation mark inbetween the quotation marks.
Anyway, another thing I liked about this is how well you got into the character, as if YOU have gone through the same situation (although I hope you haven't, lol).
"It reminded me of how she watched over me during his age. Jealousy stirred in my stomach."
I loved that line. The great thing about Commodus is that you can somewhat relate to him, because jealousy is basically why he's turned out this way. I love how you pointed this out.
This is really one of those fics that stay in your mind. Which is why I give you a 9.8/10-that's good for me, lol.
Again...great fic. Glad I read it :)
| Darth Ducttape 11/19/07 . chapter 1
That was really good, I liked how you protrayed Commodus as admiting he had changed, but finding no great change or any real significance there. You should continue it.
| JPlover90 9/13/07 . chapter 1
I like it! I'd love it if you turned it into a story :)
| Momo 9/12/07 . chapter 1
Wow! i like it! Please continue!