Geez, its been forever since i was on here last (literally years), but thought i'd come and see what was going on, and was so happy to see how much you have been writing and that you have graduated uni!! thats awesome :) Good luck for your MA too.

Anyway! Onto the story... bought Final Fantasy 'Advent children' like a year ago, and totally fell head over heels in love with the whole final fantasy world again. (Reno is the one who gets my creative vibe going these days as well as cloud, tho!) Anyway, i completely loved where you went with this one, Lowri.
"The city draws him close and wraps him in its mystery and despair." I love how from the very beginning you suck the reader right into the story. You have just gotten better and better since i last was here, and I am floored because you were such a fantastic writer to start with.

I love reading your stuff, and look forward to looking over what else is here :)

This is simply astonishing. Without a doubt, you are the most gifted FF7 writer I have seen on this site in a long time. There are one or two errors, but other than that it's perfect.

Ooh, this fic gave me goosebumps! You write so beautifully and use incredible imagery. I loved the part where the rose drifts into the water and sinks. . . I can just imagine Aerith calling Cloud's gift down to her. Very romantic! ^_^

Very nice little one-shot. I can't think of any constructive criticism that needs to be mentioned, really. Just wanted to say that I liked it. Cheers!

So sweet. Kind of sad but it's still sweet. You captured Cloud's feelings perfectly, as usual xD
~Beeria