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Lady-CheshireXIII
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abuseFunny! But I saw a couple of spelling mistakes. (I'm really nit-picky when it comes to spelling) I'm pretty sure Scar THREW Jesse through the air; and instead of WE'RE been through so much, it's WE'VE been through so much together. Sorry, like I said, I'm pretty nit-picky about spelling. Anyway, I love you!
roxie-san
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abusewow...that was weird yet funny...
Archer began to weep into his hat. “I served with Jesse in the Amestris army. (sniff) He was the best frigging soldier I ever met! And he never paid me my five dollars, so if you don’t mind…”
something tells me he ain't ever getting his five bucks!
thanks man for the laughter
Nessle
2007-09-26
ch 1,
abuseROFL

Ah, just what I needed. Excellent job.

Gotta love a good crack!fic. xD
The Your Mom Alchemist
2007-09-15
ch 1,
abuseomg. That was absolutely great.

"I don't know, maybe there is a goodminton..."

xD That's going on my myspace, with credit to you.

~Goshujin Reidou
Redd Dawn
2007-09-13
ch 1,
abuseOmg that was so funny...
September Rhyme
2007-09-13
ch 1,
abuseLOL!

That was so damn funny!!

XD

I LOVED IT!

XD
AkitaFallow
2007-09-12
ch 1,
abuseOMG, that was the most crack thing I have EVER read, you know? But then, I've never really read many crack fics... maybe I'll start, and have my days brightened by the absolute insanity of it all...

RAWR! FEAR MY NEW INSANITY! XP
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