This story is just nasty. Sarah kissing Sir Ellery is just plain perverted. I've been liking your stories, if not your appalling semiliteracy, nonexistent grammar and poor spelling, but this one is disgusting. I gave it a few chapters more, as it seemed to be getting better, but this is it.

Eeewwww. I am not liking this Jareth at ALL. And Jeremy even less. And I'm REALLY not liking them kissing. Bye.

Baronets, though they have hereditary titles, are strictly not considered members of the peerage. Peers are dukes, marquesses, earls, viscounts and barons (lords).

great fic but what happens when they have children? what will he/ she inherate?
by the way loves the split father ending for jareth made my day

i was wondering doesn't toby have to be from linda's line to be the wished away child?

and yet another story i'm only too happy to add to my favorites :)

interesting chapter!

Lord Fagin is quite the idiot. he should know that Jareth can see all through his crystals.

Jareth is not only drop dead gorgeous, but he's intelligent and calculating. so of course he'll be one step ahead.

it's hilarious that Fagin thinks he's got this great plan and no one knows.

what a dumbass, lol.

i have to admit... that was pretty hot

interesting...

wow

Very good and steamy and complicated. I must say it took a significant shift in tone through the story from extremely dark to more of a moderate tone. Not that that is a bad thing. I found it interesting how young Sarah seems, and read, at the beginning of the story, which made me a wee bit squickish about where it would inevitably go, but the more mature version later was much more appropriate. It read as if a very long amount of time passes, rather than just a winter's break.

LOVE IT!

one query tho ... you made the trows invulnerable to iron...?

"He's a pig." Jareth said to Perrin.

"oink," was the comment from the leader of the palace guard.

Jareth snickered.

hehehehehehe

ooooooooooooh Jareth you bastard!

capitis viscus animus Una

head heart soul together

caput capitis : head / top, summit / chief

viscus : flesh, internal organs, bowels, entrails, heart.

animus : courage, vivacity, bravery, will, spirit, soul.

animus : character, intellect, memory, consciousness, often mind.

una : (adv.) in one, together.