Oh, Lucas! So timid! I am STILL READING!! WHOO!

Aw! That was SO sweet, Jun!!

Really interesting on how you're merging the real continents with Sinnoh--I'll be waiting for the next chapter with bated breath!

I'm familiar with Reborn! so when I spotted this fic, I can't help but be amused at what you've done with the characters. I really enjoy the story so far and the twists that you have taken from the games. The time that you spend emphasising the roles of characters like Jupiter and Ayako only make this fic better! I can't wait to read what happens next and am eagerly awaiting your continuation.

I enjoyed this story. And the Twinleafshipping we need more stories of these pairing. Keep em coming please.

Thank you for this interesting series. I haven't been able to find much that were not yaoi around here. And since you're actually making one I'll certainly read it. LIVE CROSSOVER FANFICs!
Lookin forward to more. Thx. I used to like pokemon, but there were so many I eventually gave up keepin up to date. *Sigh. Thx again. (Too many thxs? I hope not)

Very nice. Loved that ending.

-JBK2K1

PS. Could your first language happen to be Japanese?

Wow, this chapter was much more action packed and touching then the last one. Keep up the good work!

-JBK2K1

Well, despite a few English errors (which you already warned me about, so no biggie), this is actually a pretty good story thus far, taking almost completely on the Diamond and Pearl versions of the stories.

Gonna be reading a bit more...

JBK2K1

PS. In case you just deleted my PM, I really am sorry for my behavior.

(Play: One Winged Angel (FFVII version))

Alright let's see, your battle scenes are progressing, let me give you a tip or two for future ones:

1. Try to keep both sides balanced; a battle is more fun when the hero and villan are equally good in battle.

2. Surpises, let it look like one side is losing and the losing side pulls an ace out, whether or not the ace suceeds is all up to you.

3. Don't extend battles just to make it longer, sometimes a good battle can be if you know the enemy's weak point, this goes for heroes and villans.

4. Descriptions of effects, if the enemy uses earthquake keep in mind what it would change for the battle, for both sides.

That's it, I hope these tips will help you out.

(End: One Winged Angel)

Michael

I loved this chapter! Your battles are getting more and more better! Keep it up!

An update! Go Michael, go Michael, it's your birthday, not really, ok cheering time's over now for the review:

LOVED the battle scene, I give a 9.7, it was very remnisent to the comic, the peril of the traimer during a battle, one of the things I liked about the comic book. And it was clever of the one guy to use an atempt of fighting just to steal the bag, that was smart of him.
I'm very glad that you are as skilled as writing fight scenes as well as story scenes, that is why I'm so psyced about this chapter.
Anyway can't wait for next update and the next battle, it will be most interesting indeed.

Michael Luicus Fri

Here are my 5 questions. 1. What is the fanfic about? 2. What locations are being used for the fanfic? 3. When does it take place? 4. How old is anyone in the fanfic? 5. Is the Hikari in this fanfic, the same one from the anime? Be sure to let me know.

Please don't ever stop! I adore this story!

Hi it's Michael,
An update at last, thank god. Anyway only one problem with this chapter, I really don't aprove of that one word Hikari called Hayato, (yeah I know I swear in my fic, but I don't use THAT word, even I have my limits) but it's not my place to judge what you use, as long as the rating doesn't change to M, I'll keep reading. Anyway great chapter, and as for reveiws and hits, give it time it always takes awhile before something else comes up. Oh yeah, as a fan of the PKMN Adventures I think you're doing quite well, keep it up.

P.S. Has Toby Danger answered yet?