|Reviews for Pieces of Dust|
| tcsportsmed7 12/28/10 . chapter 1
Awwww, this was so sad, but amazingly written. *tears*
| Sis2ACsrSalad 10/5/07 . chapter 1
Wait.. That's like too sad :(
I don't understand... Like, they had just confessed each other's love to each other and promised they would leave together. I understood that and everything leading up to that. The pure beauty of love.
But I also understand that she has her family to care for as well.
But what about Ryan? What about the love he holds for her etched in every inch of his being? What about leaving together. I don't want him heartbroken waiting at the trainstation at one, with no Marissa in sight. Can you imagine the heartache? I'm like crying right now, But I thought I'd be crying in tears of joy. Will they never meet again? They have to :( I can't imagine them living a lifetime without EVER experiencing that love they had for each other and only BY each other, ever again. I don't understand.
| chasitybsp 9/18/07 . chapter 1
Charlynn- What a beautiful story, The ending was sad but as you said they served such a meaningful purpose in each other's lives. I really loved it so much, Thank you for such good readings...
| areil2010 9/13/07 . chapter 1
You had me. I thought it was going to be a "runaway in the sunset" moment, but unfortunately it wasn't.
U gotta do a sequal so they can be reunited.
| Janer59 9/13/07 . chapter 1
aw...I love it! i really wanted them to be together, but this is how they were alike! they both gave up their happiness to take care of their families! you're awesome!
| patto85 9/13/07 . chapter 1
you have done it again. you make the readers feel as if they are there and i love that. you are talented and i hope that you never stop writing. please keep the ryrissa alive as long as you can. :)
| ryan91 9/13/07 . chapter 1
Aw. So sad, she didn't run away with Ryan. I love the ending. Great job!
| JANNIE06 9/12/07 . chapter 1
OH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE THAT THEY MEET AGAIN...YOU JUST HAVE TO DO A PART 2 LIKE U DID FOR FATE...PLEASE!