why do i get the feeling that this story is going to end sadly?

oh. woww.
that was SO in character that... whoaa

awesomee.

seriously, you write really good.
keep it upp.
pretty please! :-]]

Want more ! now ! T^T
*pout*

Yay! They hooked up! (Does a jig) That was a good story. I love it. Hehe...everything Wilson said about House was true, mean, but true.
^_^
Dlbn

Okay...now I have to try to write something con-critty, but not tell you how much you suck. This will be hard.

Hah, just kidding! I really loved the way you opened it with the first two paragraphs, it set the tone very nicely and was just right for how Wilson would react. Speaking of Wilson, you did a great job of keeping him IC for this...his reactions were just what I'd expect. House was a little more hit-and-miss; you got his sarcastic side just right (as you always do) but I just can't imagine him elaborating about his feelings as much as he does here, even with Wilson. Also, wow, did you suck at writing that little kissing scene at the end. C'mon, you could have had Wilson enjoying it a little too much and freaking out, or have House make some snarky comment about his abilities (or lack therof) but you didn't. You were all, "they kissed for a bit and then they stopped 'cuz Wilson was all,'peace Holmes.'THE END" Sorry, epic fail on that one. But I still liked it, even though I know you'll turn it into an angst fest later on.

Favorite bit was definately House asking Wilson to be his "special someone" because I could just see House making the face and hear his tone. It made me giggle. And I wanna see how you follow this up. All I ask is that the Ducklings have hilarious reactions when they find out. Good job, loser!

nice, update soon please!