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Angelic Celina 2008-08-25 ch 2,	abuseI love story! Especially the humor! XD I was like WTF when Stella kicked Botta and was cracking up when Tiki was scratching Vidarr's face! XD -Angelic Celina
Meh. Why should I tell you? 2008-08-11 ch 4, anon.	abuseYou might want to go through this chapter and fix it up a bit. I just started to re-read this story, and... well, stuff is messed up. The italics around where Noishe and Stella are weird, and the part where Noishe is talking about not liking the color purple and Stella threatening to extort him are all mixed together to the point that I only know what's happening because I've already read the scene multiple times. I dunno what happened, but it's definitely bad enough that you shouldn't just leave it. Oh, and chunks of the chapter seem to be stuck at the bottom - I also now remember something like this happening with an A/N in another chapter. It's distressing moi! D: I'm also only part-way though reading the chapter over, but just decided "screw it, she needs to know the horror NOW" partway through. I'll review again if I see more distressing things. Oh! Before I forget! I'm so sorry that you've had to re-write chapter 19 so much! You need some huggles!! :( huggleshuggleshuggles (Just know that I'd probably like it no mater how bad you think it is.)
nohaydeque 2008-06-22 ch 18,	abuseIt's a pretty good OC-based story... though I like it better when you focus more on humor than angst. I laughed my ass off at "Cannabalistic tomato fishy food." :D I also like it better when you update. -cough, cough- -nohaydeque-
KamaraKitsuia 2008-05-07 ch 18,	abuseWow, this is good. By the way, I watched Sweny Todd too.
Rini Tsukino 2008-03-28 ch 18,	abuseHello! I've heard about your stories a few times and finally got around to reading one! Yay! Anyway, this was a great story. I've actually spent a few days trying to catch up to where you were, and finally succeeded. I really like that your storioes are nice and long. I'm actually a huge bookworm in addition to my video-game obsession, so I really enjoy just sitting and reading for hours at a time. Unless it's Shakespeare. Or Edgar Allen Poe. Heh, I'm rambling, aren't I? Anyway, I can't wait to see the rest of this and how it plays out! Stella is absolutely amazing! And you've developed the characters so much better than the game did. The whole noogie thing a chapter or two ago (I forget how long ago it was...) was so hilarious! My parents have asked me a few times if I was alright while I was reading this, I was laughing so hard. But you mix in the right amount of seriousness to keep things in hand and moving, albeit sometimes rather slow. But hey, it works for me! more reading! It was strange having Stella make flower crowns with Colette, but kinda cute, in a good way. I also really like that she's developing such great relationships with the characters. And to the poll back some chapters, I want Zelos to live. He's certainly not my favorite character, but after finding out about his past, I actually pity him a little. Which is quite an improvement, considering I used to comepletely hate him and was planning on keeping him in the party only for the two playthroughs I needed for his and Colette's items in the Flanoir scenes. Meh, I'm rambling again... Heh, anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Canada Cowboy 2008-03-16 ch 18,	abuseThose were some LONG sequences you have in that chapter, and it may be because of Lloyd's stupidity or that rant by Raine, but I wasn't exactly impressed with the charaters' actions. Not that it took anything away from your chapter, but I though they should at least be a bit smarter, or at least more "logical". And the overall flow of this story seems to be at a snail's pace, which kind of worries me, because at the very least you might think there's more to Stella than that meets the eye. And the fact that you kind of postponed talking about her past doesn't really help you. I just hope you can speed it up a bit so that we can know more about what's going on, rather than curse at our computer screens at Lloyd's stupidity/Colette's clumsiness/Raine's cussing, etc. BTW, you said you liked watching hockey. What's your favourite NHL team (mine are the Flames and the Avalanche)?
Magical Frying Pan of Wonde... 2008-03-15 ch 18,	abuseyesyesyesyesyes when I first thought 'omfgroflcopterrunzorzs' or something like that - in other words, I was frigging excited. The only way to make it better was if a random hamster did the disclaimer. >.> er, yeah, i want a random hamster to do the disclaimer XC anyways, I first saw the chapter length and was like 'woah'. It was realy long (which was awesome), but it's easy to type the main content of it. Stella gets beaten up by bullies, gets high on herbs (yeah, of COURSE it was herbs...), we finish the wind seal and blammo, the town i forget thanks to my hilarious memory starts burining. On a happier note, the children survive cause they were playing hide and seek with Sheena, and they suck so they cheat and leave town, while ironically Sheena leaves too. Yeah, pretty messed up game there. There were a few typos i noticed (I think I counted two, i can go back and check if you want), and the Noishe stuff was heavy. I had to read it twice; 1 skim and 1 looking for hidden messages. Sorry about your sucky turn of events, just stay away from sharp objcts u.u sorry if that was offensive to anyone. It was a joke, you know, the things that are supposed to laugh? kay, now you laugh here. Wow, another lame review courtesy of everyone's favourite frying pan.
XxXTwilight-SinXxX 2008-03-15 ch 18,	abuseI love your fic so much. I check pretty much everyday for your updates! It has become one of my favorite fics to read. I love Stella she's a perfect combination! Sarcastic but not bitchy nice but not saintly(not a mary-sue either). You really did an amazing job. she even gets scarred. (no magically perfect skin)
TwilightSeraphim 2008-03-15 ch 9,	abusecool!
aquadragonsayian 2008-03-15 ch 12,	abuseHoly crap, this story's pretty good! Keep up the good work!
sliver of time 2008-03-15 ch 18,	abuseAwesome chapter! I have no idea whats happening with Stella... is she learning her abilities?
Poet Bucky 2008-03-15 ch 18,	abusexD awesome chapter. very sombre at the end there. -shivers- freaky. but its very well written, and I like this chapter. It saddens me that Stella lost her necklace. hmm...poor Stella. poor poor Stella. I know what you're doing to a point, yet I don't have a clue at the same time. confusing. Bucky.
emi the cookie monster 2008-03-15 ch 18,	abuseYES YOU'RE BACK! I love this story. The long chapters especially because I love reading. I think I've said that before but it's so so true. :) I would adore it if you'd update again. I'm sorry about the drama in your life right now. But I wanted to let you know that seeing NEW CHAPTER Deathcatcher" in my inbox pretty much made my day. I've been waiting on this story for awhile now. So thanks for updating and giving me such a great read! Lloyd and Kratos with flower crowns! dies laughing "Genis’ hair is silver because he’s a hairy gorilla that likes to surf on killer whales" AHAHA. That made me define rofl. My brother looked at me like I was insane. That only made me laugh harder. Anyway, I hope that your life problems will die down soon. Best of luck writing, I look forward to an update, Emily < 3
eragonfanatic92 2008-03-15 ch 18,	abuseI hate March too. And the beginning of April. I censor those months out of my brain. I hate preps also. One time a prep spilled water, and she started screaming it was disgusting. It was PLAIN DRINKING WATER. Grr...makes me mad. Flower crowns...and Kratos. I don't think they should be in the same sentence. But that was funny! Muahahahaha...there are many ways to torture Kvar. I'm looking forward to it.
Moonshine's Guide 2008-03-15 ch 18,	abuseI liked this… poor Stella. I'm sorry she got hurt… but Higher-than-a-kite Stella was funny. I also Liked the science lesson… I really enjoyed it. Hehehe. Good chapter… also I didn't know there was a 'Catholic Hell' just for us Catholics… no I'm joking, you're talking like the nine circles of Hell right?? I just found that amusing, because I read it wrong the first time, and stupidly thought you said Hell for catholics… okay, I'll shut up now. Can you have Jezebel/Jizabel from Godchild do the disclaimer next time… here's a link for more info… http://en. Thanks for having Rufus do it this time… KEEP WRITING! I need to go check out the poll now…

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