 J Lesley 2007-09-13 . chapter 1 I think it is really well-written and I enjoyed reading it, a nice little insight into House's mind.
By the way, in the sentence, "...and especially not something as trivial as what the next day's whether was going to be." you should have used the word 'weather' not 'whether'.
Oh, and when you were talking about Cameron wanting "a deep insight into the mind of her employee." you should have used the word 'employeer'. Sorry, if I'm overanalyzing your work, just thought you should know. |