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Visitkarte 12/27/09 . chapter 1
Well, it's an idea worth exploring, but I thing you didn't go very deep in this matter. You need to go deeper than that, dear, but if you are/were till at school while writing this one, it's a great start.
FluffySmarts 10/13/07 . chapter 1
aw
YoungFreak92 9/17/07 . chapter 1
I'm... stunned. All I can do is to lift my jaw up from the floor and give you a slow nod, grinning like a fool. Just simply... amazing.
Merlynnod 9/14/07 . chapter 1
It is a curious way of being. So determined to cut oneself off from the rest of the world for so many reasons, content and sometimes mostly happy to simply be left alone...But there are always those times when you would give your eye-teeth just to have someone to lean on. But you're so very good at being independent that no one ever realizes that you're just as fallible as they are...sometimes it might be nice to not be so alone.

Nice story. ;)
J Lesley 9/13/07 . chapter 1
I think it is really well-written and I enjoyed reading it, a nice little insight into House's mind.

By the way, in the sentence, "...and especially not something as trivial as what the next day's whether was going to be." you should have used the word 'weather' not 'whether'.

Oh, and when you were talking about Cameron wanting "a deep insight into the mind of her employee." you should have used the word 'employeer'. Sorry, if I'm overanalyzing your work, just thought you should know.
anon 9/13/07 . chapter 1
So true. Sometimes I suppose people like House who have been through a lot just don't know WHAT they want anymore. They just long for the opposite of what they do have.

Anyway, thanks for sharing!

I enjoyed it!
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