Please finish! This is excellent, a wonderful characterization of Jareth, childlike and alone. This is wonderful!

This is truly brillant! I knew I shouldn't have read something that's so old because I immdiately got hooked. If you ever decide to continue I will be very happy...

sad . . .unfinished. :(

I KNEW I shouldn't have read this, especially when it hasn't been updated in such a long time, but I was curious...
...and it paid off.
This was very intriguing and my heart went out to the once proud King.
So, what happens next..or what happened?

I realize I am jumping on the bandwagon after the fact, however, I just found this fic. It is really quite good. Very well written, and DIFFERENT! It reminds me a little of something I read many years ago...(that was finished)...and has a quality of writing not often seen in these parts. The "Pied Piper" really should be completed. You can not possibly leave our hero Jareth to rot away. The Labyrinth needs its King, Sarah needs her dreams, and we all need to find the real baby-murderer. Fae he may be, but he still needs friends & hope. Please, you have shown much creative writing ability in this, and other fics you have penned, will you finish them? Leaving us in limbo "is not fair!" Will you do something to remedy this?

Please, more! ;_; Seriously, this story has intrigued me. It's so much different from the other "after the Labyrinth" stories that I have read! In addition, your use of description and emotion have me hooked. So... don't leave me hanging! Please finish this story! :D

you just gotta finish... i'm not ashamed tok beg. you can't leave j like that!

Sad, mystical I like it. I have read nothing vagely similar before.please update.

Amazing...I do hope that you write more. That was one of the best fics I have ever read. Wonderful. Many blessings to you.

Hey! Poor Jareth! Are you gonna fix him?

*sniff* *Hugs Mini-Jareth*

Wow... your writing is really great, and this plot is quite original! I can't wait for the next segment!

This story has developed well so far. Please, add more!

Wow! An original theme, and very well written! I love the story, just one tiny bit of feedback. There are a few mistakes that wouldn't be catchable by a spellchecker, such as "weather" instead of "whether", which tended to interupt the spell that your story was weaving on me. Otherwise, nicely done.

I have high hopes of Sarah - after all the Tarot foretold that Jareth would be saved by the woman he loves.. Please add more soon, it's not often I find myself so taken by a story.;)

This is such a good story! Please get the next chapter out soon, I'm dying to find out what happens.