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lilly Moren
2007-11-26
ch 3, anon.
abuseoh alexis...thats a really sad story and it makes me miss my dog now, i even have a frown on my face from that sad story u wrote.
Dimunda Ice Eagle
2007-11-25
ch 1,
abusethis was pretty good. it made me think. hope you write more! ^__^
Damned Lolita
2007-11-25
ch 1,
abuseI shall kill Jonas. Very nice, I liked Cyndaquil, but never thought of a backstory. Guilty. Very good, though.
2 lazy 2 log in
2007-10-25
ch 2, anon.
abuseOh whoa, Jonas=Butch? D'ya mind letting me torture the b@$t@rd till he can't talk and then blow his brains out with my trusty M1911 .45?



I simply believe this.
'An eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth...'
Quaystor
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abuseWhoa... that was sad... so sad... but rate a story in which a Pokémon is attacked like that K+? Isn't that a bit low?
Juptile
2007-09-19
ch 1,
abusePoor Cyndaquil. It kinda makes sense now why she always has her back flame lit up.

(gives a sad smile) Nice story.
lilly
2007-09-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhat a sad story. When cyndaquil saw her mom get shot by jonas I was crying my eyes out. How could anyone be that cruel too a pokemon? I can't get over the fact that jonas is part of Team Rocket. Will they ever meet up with him?
SuperheroesandJedisRSoHot!
2007-09-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh my good. Jonas did all of that to poor little cyndaquil! That is awful? Did he ever get caught because he should have been arrested for pokemon-abuse. Will they ever meet up with him? I can't believe he was part of Team Rocket! He is so evil (cruel's too kind a word for him)
Wait.What
2007-09-14
ch 1,
abuseSad 'n depressing. Nice 'n long, no spelling errors, grammar erors, or typos from what I could tell. Tam Rocket is evil. TT_TT
Routh's6PackBlongs2Me
2007-09-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh my god. I was bawling like a baby. Poor, poor cyndaquil. No wonder she never told any one about that night, she was too scared to.
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