Hey, just finished reading part three, I didn't see a part four so I assume that's the one you took down. Hope you get it back up soon.

I have issue. Some of the dialouge seems a little formal, especially from the Sentinels. I know that if they spend all that time learning and training they would speak a little more formally but they are still teenagers. Or maybe go completly formally and make it akward for everyone else...just my thoughts. I love the story and I really want to see Billy get better and get back with his friends(and w/Rebekkah) Keep writing!

heartfelt to the end. that's the way i like it

love it awsome end hopeful in the next part of the series we answers about tommy and his birth mother and why he was left. hope for tommy and kim ramance they belong togetger lok forward to your next story

Loved it! Update soon!

GREAT UPDATE

Excellent!

love it update fast poor kim hope she ok

Good chapter! Can't wait to see what Kim's final trial is. _

love it kim kicked butt update

love it very sweet glad we are going to learn about tommy birth mother and parents poor tommy and kim I have like tommy as the white ranger and the Falcon and kim as the pink crane update fast

love it

love it update fast just read could some how add an explainion of what happen to tommy birth parents

ok, i'm interested and please continue to write more