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Reviews for: The End of Beginnings
Selene08
2008-02-16 . chapter 1
*cries* wah! No! Why must this unrequited love thingy between Walter and Girlycard continue?! Wah! Its so sad and it makes me cry!

But anyways! That was a superbly done story! It was beautifully written and conveyed a ton of emotion. As seen above. I absolutely loved it! Keep up the wonderful work!^_^
thegirlfrommexico
2007-09-27 . chapter 1
Aw that was cute, poor little distressed Walter. I really got to love this couple.
franny-o
2007-09-26 . chapter 1
Wonderfully written, my favorite part would have to be the last line!
AtticusBlackwolf
2007-09-21 . chapter 1
SO cute
theromancandle
2007-09-14 . chapter 1
How original! And so very sad. Great piece. :)
mslcat
2007-09-13 . chapter 1
as always, I love your stories. They can be short or long, but they are always deep.
Red Ice Remmy
2007-09-13 . chapter 1
Wow. That was very sad.
But very good as well.
I like the dialogue and the movement, sorta pulled me in.
Thanks for another good story.
kriitikko
2007-09-13 . chapter 1
I don't think anyone had ever before write how Walter might have felt about Alucard's improsenment. I think you did wonerful job, though I would have wanted the reunion part also, just to see if Walter agreed of what Alucard told him.

Anyway, great work, as everything else you do.
Sanguinary Tears
2007-09-12 . chapter 1
Really sad that Alucard is forced to be sealed and leave behind a gloomy Walter. I love the romance between them, beautifully done!
mercutio-rane
2007-09-12 . chapter 1
Beautifully done and yet sad...This is one of my favorite pairings, but since I cosplay it, I can't really imagine writing it for some reason. You always have such a lovely way with Hirano's characters, and I hope you write more of these two in the future!
kerricarri
2007-09-12 . chapter 1
A nice Girlycard piece, with enough of that flair and flirtation and seems to define his girlycard persona, even reflecting the casual jeery-aura-esque thing he has hanging around him in canon. Alucard's nonchalance was quite surprising, considering the flashbacks Integra had of the moment she found lockedup!Alucard. They suggested he was quite...adamant about escaping. Well, in any case, seeing a young, naive Walter being so earnest like this was quite the pleasure, furthering proving what Alucard said must've been true. It worked though, since Walter is so...jaded as an old man. Anyway, enough of my somewhat confusing ramblings, the parting sentence of the oneshot made me feel nostalgic. Good times, good times...
Anatra DeSylvianno
2007-09-12 . chapter 1
GASP! This is so sad! I don't Walter to be so lonely and miss Alucard for 20 years! That's worse than if they were just normal partners and Alu was sealed for another reason! Lol! Great fic as per usual! I love the final words!
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