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| CaRiNeSs 2008-01-30 ch 1,  | abuse“Danny, they’re so small! What happens if I drop one?” she sniffled. “That’s why we’ve got two,” he joked. That was so funny! Very cute too :) Great job on this! |
| IluvPeterPetrelli 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseLove it! You should update soon, I love Flack with Olivia. |
| LiaBelle 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abusei loved it! especially the "that's why we have two" line. that's so classic danny! |
| chili-peppers 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseAw! I loved this! So sweet! Loved the way you wrote Lindsay crying and all hormornal. I had to laugh at the line Quote:Danny, they’re so small! What happens if I drop one?” she sniffled. “That’s why we’ve got two,” he joked. Trust Danny to say something like that lol. Excellent job. |
| Chelliyah 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseaww so cute!! i love it! havent read any of your others, so off to do it now! :D |
| daytimedrama 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseaw I loved this whole team interaction, I especially love hormornal crying Lindsay. So cute, and of course Danny's sarcastic comments are adorable. Bravo! |
| bbandgsr 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseAnother great fic, loved it! also "What happens if I drop one?” she sniffled. “That’s why we’ve got two,” he joked." had me laughing so hard!! |
| marialisa 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseExcellent follow up. I adore Flack and so I was more than happy with the focus on him in this fic ;) I'd defintely plead for some more follow ups - you have a great thing going here! |
| p3karen 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseAwesome i loved it |
| mabelreid 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseAw... poor Flack everyone is so surprised that he could have a good idea. LOL. “Danny, they’re so small! What happens if I drop one?” she sniffled. “That’s why we’ve got two,” he joked. Hahaha. That's too funny! Great job. |
| Madison Bellows 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseAnother great one shot, I wish I could write them! Too many "favorite" lines to name them all here. You get the interaction down between the characters so well even in AU situations. Kudos and cheers! |
| fatkat 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was incredibly sweet! I love everyones suprise that it was Flack's idea and his reaction too. You write everyone so well, no one seems out of character at all. The conversation between Danny and Lindsay was fantastic. I always pictured the conversation to be the exact opposite with Danny voicing the fears and Lindsay backing him up it was nice to see the reverse. Great job. You have a seriously excellent collection of one shots going on. I've enjoyed them all immensely, please continue. Fatkat |
| DAnNSfreak 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuse“Danny, they’re so small! What happens if I drop one?” she sniffled. “That’s why we’ve got two,” he joked. I'm still laughing over that... hahahaha... But the whole story is so sweet. Especially the ending... your last two paragraphs turned me to mush too... great work!! |
| CarolinaH.Manning 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. and funny. the interaction was really great. and the little DL part - WOW |
| Susan1302 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuse'“That’s why we’ve got two,” he joked.' That made me choked on my breakfast. I couldn't stop laughing :P I loved it. Get well soon :D |