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Wow, the words you used..Beautiful, just beautiful.
This was simply sublime, m'dear.

Oh, my gosh.. That was the best thing to come across this morning. I agree with you fully - VERY poetic, beautiful, and just.. absolutely stunning. I adored all the pictures painted in my head so very much. You've captured Fai in this - no, freed Fai in this piece through some very gorgeous wording, and you absolutely touched very deep parts of his personality. I'm very impressed! I think my heart went a little overkill on me during the ending, though; If I wasn't about to go to school, I would cry for this. Again - AMAZING work! Keep it up. This was lovely.

That was... beautiful. Touching and... sad, and yet, giving hope.

I hope you'll have the inspiration to write more!