Great job with this! Very interesting fic, and nicely written. Awesome job!

Beautiful

Beautiful and sweet

Kate

Aww... I HOPE JAMES POTTER CHOKES! Chokes for years, not being able to breath, not being able to die, while people watch him and mock him! Spit at him and scorn him from their homes and streets!

That is so very sweet!

This is great! I love the pairing of Lily/Severus, and I love how you've made such a great AU with them! Excellent!

Riona

Such a great fic

Aww! I loved this. :D

Beautiful, I wish so much that this had happened in canon. Lily/Sev is my favourite ship, and you create a beautiful picture of them here. I love it.

Oh, and the 'After all this time?', 'Always', DH quote works fantastically well here.

This is really strange, I admit - it has never occured to me to check if you have other fics published even after I started to so immensely enjoy "This Spiral Dance." Now I did and I can only tell that I loved this fic - I would have forgiven Rowling much, even that dreadful epilog, even killing Snape (had he a "good" death) but her making Lily, who was supposed to be the "best person," that - a person unable to forgive her best friend - well, in that moment the book was almost literally thown on the wall and now it always takes me hours to persuade myself to reopen it - eventhough, I am attempting to write a fic starting in the middle of it. Thank you for this as well - I loved the Patronus scene. (-:

OH I LOVE IT I SIMPLY LOVE IT. Although I always imagined Snape's patronous (it is wasn't Lily

s) to be a bat like his animagus.

Gorgeous. Just gorgeous.

Amazing! I've never actually thought about a Lily/Sev relationship, and this a exhilarating way to depict one.

-Raine-?

Beautiful! If only it really happened this way... *adds to favorites* :)

Wonderful Fic! loved it!