cute

You wanted to know about small grammatical errors, lol... second sentence "del" (deal) was misspelled.

And I love your new drabble(s)... The Dark makes me want to write a story with a similar prompt, but I know I don't have time for writing at the moment (I barely have time to catch up on chapter updates)... I love the mini-character development in each. And I can completely see Harry's point of view. (RAIN ROCKS!)

:o)

Good job(s)!

SO CUTE! Everyone, lets give harry a hug! "hugs"

Honestly, ow! He looked so cute!

Congrats ma friend xD

Very cute!

Very Nice and sweet too.

OH so cute.

Thanks for sharing.

So Sweet. Thanks for that insight. :)

that was so cute. I love little Harry!

of course its cute

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri

Haha adorable. You need some punctuation here and there (for example, "as it was their son's sixth birthday" and "but he didn't mind, he was fine playing alone.") But I can't deny, it was sweet and sentimental.

You have driven me to tears. The poor mite.

Well done, you.

good chapter