A great little story!

I just wish we could have seen more of Ducky in charm-action mode!

oh, so glad you've continued this. I hadn't read the third chapter. McRuby and McGiva! Or is that McGuby? No doesn't doesn't sound right.

This is so much fun! I loved Ducky's interest in Marge; and the Ziva-Tim interaction is great!

Oh, my. Our McGee, surrounded by women! (There was a wonderful comic book series in the 1980s about a handsome secret agent named Lester Girls who was actually quite shy, including around women, and wanted nothing more than to be an accountant and settle down with a nice, mousy little woman in a house with a picket Fence. ("The Trouble With Girls"). Reminds me of this situation. :)

Ha! I love the idea of the coffee lady. And Gibbs' reaction! :)