i love the "or did he?" DON DON DON
lol sorry that just made me laugh
-zoey

amazing, perfect wonderful
loved how you tied all the little moments in from the premiere and then some. the chalk scene...the little moments at home, perfect

great job!

as Paris Hilton would say... "that's hot"!

That was a great 5 chapters...it's neat to have their thoughts turned into a story...keep up the good writing!!

Cute. ^_^ Very nice story, nice ending.

how cute! I hope Gris and Sara stay together, foreva!! I wish gris would show he's jealous sometimes on the show! He' so so so unshowing!

Awesome story!

What a fantastic way to end a beautiful story. I have loved every installment, but this chapter was my favorite. I just adored your last three lines. They were so beautiful and conveyed so much emotion.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

Fantastic as always!! Please write more soon!!

Wow. That was AMAZING. Thank you... it was AWESOME. Very well written.

Wow, that was fantastic. I was expecting something completely different and absolutely loved this. I liked the style you chose. It was different, and made the whole thing much more pensive than it would have been otherwise.

Fabulous!

It's awesome! keep writing!

The last line made me splutter tea over my laptop! Poor Grissom! He needs an excuse, fast XD I love the fact that he can't control himself over Sara in this fic... tis amusing. This is getting very interesting. ^__^

LOL! This is really funny! Good job! Can't wait to read more!

OMG I love this story. Hilarious!! Please update soon!