Well I liked it

...Just ignore the previous commenter--some people just don't get subtle genfic. And this is, you know. Subtle. You really excel at subtle, quiet stuff, which, when coupled with your amazing ability for those hit-hard endings, is really awesome.

(Of course, the other thing you do well is twisted, dark stuff--and considering that right now your main muse seems to be Deidara, I'm amazed I haven't seen more of _that_ type of fic, but, oh well...)

I like how this is in Sasori's POV, but you don't let on until the end. Again, see the hit-hard endings. Keep it up--and do more stuff for other characters, too--Deidara can wait for a while... ;P

UKYAHAHAHAHAHA! XD XD

HILLARIOUS!

Write more SasoDei please!!