This is a great fic dude. Really get into the emotions of the reader. Well done

I've read a few different stories like this, but I like the way you incorporated the happenings of the show with your own twists. I feel kinda silly, though, since I just posted a much-too-long post on the forum of the Spike-is-evil-and-that's-why-I-don't-like-him variety.

Good job. I'll check out the new story in the series, too. =)

Looking forward to reading more, although I don't see a point in making Anya a vampire, vengeance demons are already immortal

Cool. Everyone's becoming vamps.

Oh I hope everything works out for Anya.

Keep writing.

Got to admit, I like this story. Can't quite put my finger on what it is, but it has a flare different from other Buffy becomes a vampire stories. Anyway, good job.

hay!
I was hesitant about your story as it started developing further. But it has turned out really great. Keep up the good work

Great chapter. Hope you come back to this story soon!

Aw I am going to miss this,

So now Xander is going to be a Vampire wonder what Spike will say to that.

Uh oh.. there be a smackdown a comin.

Oh I loved it.

Keep writing more.

As of chapter 4 I am officially very interested in this story. Please write more. I really like your writing style, no gaping grammatical errors, nor spelling mistakes. Keep it up.