i love your story

*claps* BRAVO BRAVO!

I'm so glad that there was a happy ending! Is there a sequel to this? It seems like there could be, maybe where the humonculi and Ed and Al team up to defeat Dante or something. :) Because really, everyone would just be so much happier without her. . And it could have a happy ending, too. :D

i realy like the alternativee ending better but both r realy good

I definately like this ending better. Hooray for happy endings!

FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC. Pardon my French. No, wait, don't, 'cause it was necessary. This was frigging amazing, really... just such a well-thought-out, deep, all-around impressive fic. Don't think I've seen a single Edvy fic that could possibly compare to this one; I loved, loved, loved it. Fantastic job :)

... Does this techniclly count as incest? Hm, either way, it was AWESOME.

Wow.

I have reads many Edvy fics, but, wow. This is one of the TWO Edvys' I've found in which Ed and Envy become close AND that didn't strike me as portraying either character inaccurately. Thank you. Thank you so very much. You have an amazing skill. I also hope (desperately) that you will right a sequel to each ending. That request is probobly very demanding, but both endings left some questions unaswered.

Ending 1:

Does Ed ever ge Al back?

Is Envy still denying his "problem"?

Does Dante kill Envy? (he's useless now, isn't he?)

Ending 2:

Does Envy change sides?

If so, how does Dante react?

How does the military react?

CAN Envy even change sides? (after all, Envy does have to obey Dante wether or not he wants to)

Both Endings:

How does Al react?

That was a longer review than I'd origanally intended. Please write a sequel to each ending. And answer the questions. Please.

LFTRE

I can't stop "Aww"ing xD Poor Al, he must have felt like a third wheel. I love the second ending! I cried at least five times throughout all the story. What can I say? It was beautiful T_T

Ooooh, nice story. I love the whole psychological, angsty emotional torment. You should probably think about changing the genre, though. XD And I can't tell which ending I like more, honestly. Both are kinda powerful, you know? Lol

Aw I liked the alternate ending much better... I guess I really am a sucker for happy endings XDD

The first ending was more fitting, I think.

The second ending could have been better; I feel it was rushed.

Overall, I enjoyed this ficcie very very much

Chu!

great story.

I love this ending, I am so grateful to have finally found something that doesn't end with everything all rainbows and butterflies *shutters.* Very well-written fic too.

I have to say I like the Alternative ending better. . The story was fantastic and was really understandable. I think you are a great writer and that you should continue writing while you can. . Eh? Well Kira out! Nyah