Once again I have fallen in love with another one of your staries. Please please please write a 3rd part. I would love to find out what happens next.

MissTreason

i find ure story forbidden love part 1 and 2 very cute and sweet. yuh theres the fact their related but i still love this story coz of it's majour cuteness _

That was really good please if you can will you write more to this story

sigh... really no continuation after so long... sigh...

Hey don't listen to those jerks who dont like your story cos it rocks. Besides, your allowed to write whatever you want anyway. It's fanFICTION. So cool your jets, everybody! Thankyew, thankyew. Anyhey write some more sometime and in the meantime you should read some FY cos it's really good as well. Peace out love BSL.

Ok !definately write more i cant wait to see your next chapter hopefull you make one it would be so awesome im dying to hear it! :)

Hey i didnt think your story was that bad. so who ever is screamin at you needs to cool it. thanx and write some more! :)

OKAY!INTERSTING NOW DO THAT AGAIN AND WITH AYA AND TOYA INSTEAD

watz next? cant wait... hehehe! hey, how bout sending me a message, id really apprecite it! bsyds, ur one heck of a writer! anywei, juz wanted u 2 know, its really sumthing writing the other way around... it really is! gee, i wish i were you! till next time! parme... OUT! ja ne!

Marvelous. I was, at first, intrigued with this twincest thingy, but then again, I never watched Ayashi no Ceres, just read a few manga, so yeah, no big deal to me.

I was practically holding my breathe for the lemon on the last part (Oh gods, Im such a pervert. XD) but rather was disappointed to read such an ending. What's with the short ending? XD

Well, I suggest you keep writing, tons of readers are waiting. )

u deserve a job well done. curses to those hu disagree...to u ppl: i hav but 1 thing to say. flame other bad writers n if u dare give a sighed review... n we shall see how gd u r since u can flame other ppl 4 their hard work.

nice. i think.

Are you going to write more? I like your stories! And why don't you just put this in the first story you wrote, just as a another chapter! Keep writing! xoxo

NO! You must write again! Please write the next chapter, FOR ME! Pretty please your a marvelous writer! If you decide to write again tell me. My email is

*gasp* where's the lemon...

WAH

oh well

I enjoyed ur story

*dis is not a flame*

Aki/Aya 4 ever!