yeah!
action rules!!
cant wait for the next lil conflict/fight to break out!

Aww... I cried. Then I was happy! I love this and I can't wait for more!

nice story so far

Chapter 3 was very good. It's got me wanting more and more. I need to know what's going on behind the door.

words can't describe the great job your doing.
can't wait for the next chapter

For you being a long time reader from what you said in the disclaimer, you write well.

Your story is really good. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

that was really good. you sounded just like stephenie! you really made the mood clear and easy to pick up on, which i love! this is my favorite that i've read so far.

nice story. This definately shows promise. keep it up!

no make it a story, it;s good so far keep it up

POST MORE NOW!I MEAN IT!!

I loved it! write more plz?!?!?!?!!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!
it was really good it seemed like part of the next book.

very good. too many "I"s in the beggining but very smooth at the end