...holy crap.
Definately not what I was expecting, but I still loved it. Very good writing. :D

DUN DUN DUN

Hm... not what I expected but very good.

well, this story was a little too sad, cute though!

Allow me...but i must say that it is a bit weird, but kinda sweet too. =D Hmm. Not bad. Keep writing, i'm looking out for the next chapter!

.. ahem. ate my review. >_>;; What I meant to say was..

D'aw, the plot is absolutely adorable! I hope Allen and Lavi make it out alive! D:

asdf--

oh please update soon!
Will lavi do it to save his love? or shall he let him perish?

INSTANT LOVE.
I can feel the suspense for this. Moarplz!