OMG, that was brilliant.

WOW!! more..more please hurry up! this is soo cool! =)

A little more man-eaty then my usual evil Sammy fics but still good.

Interesting idea. So many bad things have the potential of happening when/if Dean dies. Good fic.

Really interesting idea for what Sam might so easily become. I would have preferred this being slightly longer so that we could more fully explore how Sam scourges the earth but this was good as it was. Poor Jo. Good story.

This is one of the most chilling SPN fics I've ever read. Wonderfully written, heartbreaking and so bleak - oh, Sam!! *sniffles*

Kudos on another great story...

wow, that was bloody great!! keep up the good work!

... meep.

AWESOME.

I really liked this, but I was confused by the discontinuity. The beginning segment: "Victor had never put stock in what he’d been told about these two. He’d always been convinced that Dean was the threat. Sam was the reluctant criminal, dragged into this life by a father and brother who manipulated him for their own purposes. Every report, every shred of evidence—real evidence, anyway, not the hunter-blather he’d been forced to listen to—indicated that Dean was the instigator, the mastermind, and Sam was just a good kid with an overblown sense of loyalty who kept getting sucked into his brother’s schemes. Sam was going to be the one who eventually saw the light and helped him put Dean on death row where he belonged."

(long, I know, sorry) - this bit doesn't seem to jive with this: "“Fucking idiots,” he muttered, and jerked his cell phone out of his pocket and punched in a number. Every hunter in the world knew not to kill Dean Winchester and not to let him die. Beat him up, maybe. Make his life even more miserable, definitely. But never, ever, under any circumstances, kill him. Not unless you took care of Sam first."

Also, I'm a bit confused about Henrickson here. He goes from not believing the hunters at all and acting like they're just wackos at the beginning, to absolute belief of what's going on in the above segment, with Sam being dangerous and John binding Dean to him - which should fall under all that 'blather' he didn't believe in. It just seems like an extremely abrupt character turnabout for him that I can't reconcile with what we know of him as it stands. Also, the discontinuity between his stated desire to put Dean on Death Row, and the fervent need to not have Dean killed. I think I may be missing something. Is he trying to pin this death on the hunters, and then telling himself it couldn't be them because they knew not to kill Dean? That's - me making a big reach, because it's not very clear. But overall, I can't figure out who or what Henrickson is, exactly - not a hunter, but not a regular guy, either, not a demon - so if that was your goal, good job! :)

I liked this fic a lot - short, sweet, and though it confused me it got me thinking.

Oh, that was interesting. Sammy Winchester on a damn rampage! Is this it...? Was it a tease for something to follow...? I thought this was awesome!

Wow.

This is some powerful stuff. Interesting idea, that Victor secretly knew about hunting and Sam. And yet, he was so wrong about everything and it ended in such tragedy. Oh, Dean. Oh, Sam. Sigh...

Is this part of a series or a oneshot? Either way, it works really well. (I was just wondering, out of curiosity.)

Woah... aersome. Are you going to continue it?

i hope this never actually happens on the show, but i think it is a fantastic idea, i love how you tied everything in. really good job.

THE problem. The one we've all been dreading. Even Henriksen. Even John. Oh no!!
Awesome. I have not seen this scenario before, where Henriksen in connected to the hunter network and knows about Sam and whatever the deep dark secret is.
This is really just the beginning of the story. Are you going to continue it, or is it up to the reader to fill in the rest? Because there is definately more here.

Love the idea that Dean goes gently into that goodnight only for Sam to set the world alight when he's gone. Good little ficlet. Interesting idea of how wrong it could go. Poor Bobby!