Once again, great chapter. Your story is great and you OC is on the mark again. Keep going.

Signed

Kouta Aburame

i love you and your story!

EP!

*is of the happy*

now go write MORE!

omg, so hilarious, i luv it!

dude.

i totally just realized.

that our stories could totally fit together.

as in, Rei doesn't want to be a ninja, so of course she'd say she doesn't know anything...and act stupid about all ninja stuff.

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just a thought.

but yuh

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i be mentioned again!

yayness!

*feels loved*

lol

great update!

hope for another one soon!

Oh i really like this one, its more original than most of them and im so eager to find out what happens but you havent written anymore chappys *growl*

SQUE

i love it, it is so you!

This is actually pretty good. I guess its true. If the writer hates the work, its destined for greatness.

I saw a few spelling and grammar errors but not many. you said "ha" instead of "he" at one point and you misused too as well. Just thought you might like to know.

The development of your OC is some of the best I've seen. Most people make snippy OCs that say stuff like "What the f-ing h@##". Keep up the good work. I look forward to more.

I hope you can read my story "Seiou the Drifting Swordsmen" It's actually my first fanfic and I want to know if I did the OC well. I would greatly appreciate the time and attention of such a great writer.

Keep up the good work

Kouta Aburame

it was so funny u need to write some more

WOOT!

GO READ LYING AWAKE!

GO READ ALL YOU PEOPLES!

ITS FREAKING AMAZING!

okay im alright now

haha

the tree part!

i love it

and you bit him

lmao

sounds like something you would do...or me.

either one of us.

lol

EW

HE LICKED YOU?

gros

haha sasu-kun is a loser!

i totally agree!

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cant wait for more!

can i help you beat him with a sack of potatoes, only can my sack be full of horseshoes?

pwez?

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hehe