|Reviews for Edward|
| jane1976 3/14/10 . chapter 12
the plot is good, you write well but there is no flow, it is very disconnected .. Do not save words, write write write, then remove the excess.
| elizabeth taylor 11/7/09 . chapter 14
i'm sorry i haven't reviewed before now the storyline just made me want to keep reading. love it thank you lots for the hard work!
| ObsessedwiththeCullens 9/19/09 . chapter 16
okay im confused is anthony like renesmee did he stop aging? and whos this ella chick?
| lollifox 6/17/09 . chapter 1
lol in the summary you said this could never happen in the Twilight series. I know you wrote this before Breaking Dawn, but you weren't too much off.
| TwilightandCanadaforever 10/14/08 . chapter 16
| SimplyNikkie 9/29/08 . chapter 16
great story! good job with it! :)
| kaylar 8/9/08 . chapter 16
wow i guess you were not acctually to far off huh :), i was thinking of your story wile i was reading breaking dawn, i was like hmm this sounds like a fanfic lol
| TaylorxxTwihard 7/17/08 . chapter 16
im so confused...
great job though!
| christinemarie13 7/16/08 . chapter 16
I've enjoyed reading Bella and Edward. I very much liked the plot and the writing. And I thought Bella's powers were very original. That's hard to do and I applaud you for it. I am excited to read the next in the series and hope it comes soon. :)
| Ilovezacpattersion 6/2/08 . chapter 16
very good story keep on writing more!
| minipoison 5/27/08 . chapter 15
this story was wonderfull i actually almost started crying when jasper was holding anthony. great story i cant wait to read more!
| guitarhorselover 5/26/08 . chapter 15
lets hope its me
| Lady Bagheera 5/24/08 . chapter 2
love jasper! Love where this is going. Now off to read the rest of it!
| royalwampires01 5/16/08 . chapter 16
love the story bur em who is ella and I'm getting the impression that anthony did not want to become a vampire? is that true. pleas read me story approaching dusk the revised addition.
| Tamza 4/1/08 . chapter 16
OMFG THAT WAS SUCH A AWSOME STORY whos Ella?