 RFK 6/10/08 . chapter 12 Not a bad story. Actually, it's very clever. However . . . shouldn't Phoebe have reacted to learning that Cole had been possessed? And about this:
"With their powers no demon in the Underworld could oppose me. And it would have worked, too.”"
Why would a demon, even an upper-level one, need the powers of three mortal witches, regardless of how powerful they were. |
 brolly501 3/11/08 . chapter 12good story |
 LJones 9/21/07 . chapter 12 This was another excellent story about the Otherworld Court. But I have a problem with the ending. Why didn't the Halliwells and Leo react to the Seers' revelation about Cole being possessed by the Source? |
 HauntedPast 9/20/07 . chapter 12That was wonderful! You have such a way with dialogue. Absolutely fantastic. That was a clever little loop-hole you dug up there, about the Source never actually dying. Very sneaky. Are you studying to become a lawyer? That was some powerful dialogue. |
 Squeek 9/18/07 . chapter 10 As always and amazing work, hope you update soon and keep writting i cant get enough of your stories. Also i wonder what the sister reaction would be to that revelation. |
 Quillsandbolts 9/18/07 . chapter 10Excellent, as always. I love seeing how you add back story to the events on TV. |
 cherrylilly 9/17/07 . chapter 8This is certainly going to be interesting.
:):):):)
And there is always Cole to comfort her in case she remembers something too unpleasant:) |
 cherrylilly 9/17/07 . chapter 7I like the story
I just wish I knew where it lead
Is Cole going to find his way back to Phoebe in the end? |
 Quillsandbolts 9/16/07 . chapter 6Hilarious. I love the magical bureaucracy you've created just for these stories. |
 Anna 9/14/07 . chapter 2 keep forgetting my pw lol. I come here a lot though. I really enjoy your stories. They are very entertaing and original. I wish they would have had this kind if stuff on the show not the senseless drivel they were putting out towards the end! I love your burecaratic demon stories. plz keep on writing them! even if no-one comments on them - I guess everyone must be lazy like me because I notice your stories don't always get many reviews. I can't imagine why when some of the other fics get quite a few and they aren't nearly as good!
your fan
Anna
p.s. I KNEW Elbert would turn up! ;) |
 Anna 9/14/07 . chapter 2 keep forgetting my pw lol.I come here a lot and read though. I |
 RFK 9/14/07 . chapter 1 This must be an early Season 5 story. |