er just so you know, incase you didn't, as i'm too lazy to log in, lily's actual middle name is luna, as seen in the weasley family tree by jkr! i just thought you ought to know, because sometimes small details like that are irksome to a select number of readers (like me lol). but i suppose it's, as they say, your story, so you can choose whatever middle name you want...so yeah that's basically it, and great story so far!

Heh, and then she woke up and it was all a dream. This was a great story. I wish some of the events could have been remembered, but I understand why they weren't. I really did love it, though. Such an intricate story line for such a short fic. Very nice. Thanks for sharing!

Very suspenseful and entertaining! Well-done.

this is going so s l o w l y. ah... i hope it will speed up. good premise, nice writing. :)

I read this all in one sitting! Great story, I love time travel stuff. Keep up the good work1

Brilliant story, well written and exciting with great characterisation. I hope you don't mind if I add it to my community. It was almost disappointing in the end that Lily would never know the sacrifice her father and brothers (and Teddy) made for her, but it's better that way.

Absolutely the BEST Time-Travel story I have ever read. You really captured the home-sickness of Lily. And you actually made it a story with a plot. Even though I'm a fan of Time-Travel stories, they really have no plot. But you did great with it. I give you two thumbs up and five stars!

I really liked this story and thought it was great, however i did not really like the ending. I guess I was just kind of hoping that when they got Lily back everyone in the present time would remember everything about the disappearance and that Lily would remember what had happened to her. But, other than that, it was a really great story idea and i think you did good with everyone in the pasts emotions when Lily confessed.

Wonderful story ;)
You're talented =D a Fantastic writer I say ;)

cheers !

Forgot to ask you: could you please explain the title to me? I don't understand it.

An excellent story. I really enjoyed reading it. I love the way this developed - it started off simple, with Lily getting stuck in the past, and then you added the whole thing with Pansy. That was really good.

I'm sure someone must have mentioned that Lily's middle name is actually Luna, but I'm letting you know just in case. Though I think it works better this way, since she just used her middle name rather than make up a completely new one - at least it's still her name, you know?

Anyway, great job! Loved it!

Very entertaining!

Oh my goodness... the suspense!

LOL. Good one! For a while there, I thought it was Rita Skeeter. Pany was a surprise. Yay!

My goodness. That is what I call dramatic tension.