I enjoyed the story very much, well written

What an excellent and convoluted story. Than you so much for sharing it with us!
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Krys

Wonderful wonderful story. I loved it. I'm especially fond of amnesia stories :P The McKay whump was lovely too. I'd love to see an epilogue showing him thanking Wenn and Neera.

I thought that was an awesome story. Thanks for writing it. I especially liked how you showed the close relationships the team has with each other. Keep up the excellent writing.

A great story! While the plot held to a tried-and-true favorite plot structure of mine, this story was refreshingly creative and unique at the same time. The writing style was expert, subtly drawing in the reader to the point that I could nearly forget that I was reading it; it felt just like another great episode of the series.

I found McKay's parts to be much more engaging than Sheppard's, but the intensity and emotion of his rescue and recovery far made up for it. Again, the details made the story especially enjoyable: the picture of the team laughing together, Rodney thanking Sheppard for showing the video to Jeannie, the team's scheme to let Sheppard fly the jumper. Not to mention the endearing episode references, from the Game trade disagreements to the super sunscreen. Concluding my long-winded gushing, this has become definitely a favorite of mine.

Got behind and just had a chance to catch up on this story. Thanks so much for finishing it with a very satisfying recovery for John and his team.

Nicely done.

Glad they are going back to thank his other rescuers too.

Nicely done.

This was a very powerful chapter. I was waiting for the rest of the search Team to discover the blood, but their reactions were truly, sad and horrifying to read. I especially liked Ronon's reaction, his anger, guilt and rage were perfect, his emotions are so tense, that he has nothing left but grief.

Very well done, using the shock and massacre of the culling into blinding them a little into thinking that there's no hope left for Rodney and John's survival, given the facts before them.

Off to bed, will read the rest tommorrow.

Wow, both guys are truly separated in vastly different environments and under what I dare say are less than ideal circumstances. I'm not a big an of amnesia plots, but I'm curious how this will get resolved and whats going on with John.

You have everyone's voice down pat, including Dr Z's, its nice to see him in fic, he's often underused. I could feel Ronon's frustration, this is quite a puzzle.

This was an awesome beginning, one thing I really admired was the pace. There was a slow increase of action and time to get a feel for the tone. Ronon and Teyla's conversation about receiving the gene therapy was a nice piece of insight. I'm sure its considered some 'security' thing, but I'm surprised we haven't heard such discussion before..it certainly would help them out in tight situations like this.

The room the John and Rodney are trapped is a cool concept, its like they are trapped within some mock stargate and moving from place to place with no sense of whats happening it a serious problem, coupled with their injuries.

Oh John you and your gene getting you into trouble.

Wonderful story. I absolutely loved it. Looking forward to you next one. *hint hint* :)

This was a fantastic story. I was almost late for class because I could not stop reading it. Well Done! You had me choking up in few places. Can't wait to read you next story. Thanks again.

Love the song lyric by Hanson-
'When you have no light to guide you,
And no one to walk beside you,
I will come to you.
Have loved this story from beginning to end. Thank you.

Fabulous! I love this story! Very good ending! But I am sad that it is already finished...
Nevertheless I enjoyed reading it very much! Good story!

WOW! that was amazing!

This one is absolutely wonderful : )
I am sad it's finished. I loved the moving between places...(or should I say planets?)