best line:

He wonders if there was anything he could have done that would have made her stay, but he knows that by letting her go, he has won.

best bits

His words are simple and they shock Lily. Severus has always shocked Lily, in the little things he does, like not raising to the joke she threw at him, like his simple words, like his ability to keep his voice steady.

I couldn’t reach out to anyone, not even Remus, because I realised that they were all his friends. And I realised that you were the only person that knew me

I'm not sure this drabbling style of storytelling is working very well.

This fic is absolutely brilliant. Just what I was looking for. It appears you haven't updated in a while... but if you ever decide to return, I will be here!

I really like your insight into the JP/LE relationship, though I never ever ever read any of those fics (like her much better with Sev). I will admit that some of the language used here confuses me, but it's a good confusion.
Really, really good.

This is a truly brilliant fic, yet I am saddened that it will never be updated again, for I have already grown to love it, although I have only found it today. If you ever seek to return to the world of fanfiction, I truly hope that you will finish this.

hey! i love ur fic! i guess this review makes u one step closer to 100!! yaay!

I really love the way you write. The metaphors are apt and fresh, which I don't come across too often.

I've read all you've written in one go, and LOVE what's happening so far. I was confused in the beginning as I didn't know this was an AU, but soon got into the groove of things.

I've not seen this style of drabbly-imagery in an extended multi-chapter fic before. I really like it, and the way you've formatted things works with this tale. I'm excited in where this is going - I hope you update soon!

Keep Writing!

i. your first section's last lines are always so meaningful ;) does that mean she's going back to sev? :P (your fics are so beautiful, and yet I'm sounding like I'm watching a soap opera...)

ii. poor poor petunia *huggles her* I love your imagery in this *imagines severus*

i. my favourite of the three :) lovely adjectives for imagery and everything ;)

love, anie.

i. that last line is the awesome :) and very true. love your imagery and metaphors "chaffed lips" "cold unrelenting bricks" "like chocolate with too much milk" (i'm hungry now)

ii.And so he turns the beside clock back a few hours and returns to oblivion. ever so dramatic, loved remus! ;)

i.this is wonderful! *squee* sirius and regulus :P and awesome dialogue.

love, anie.

You have me completely and utterly blown away. Congralations, that is hard to do with me.

Your imagery was BREATHTAKING. The messages were so well done, I had tears in my eyes at the end of that chappie.

lovin' it!

xgimpy

Aw that was so sad! And so utterly, totally amazing!
Your wording and imagery was absolutley breathtaking, you could feel the Charracters as if you were them. And the position you put the charracters in makes you want to cry. You got the message across so amazingly well.

The couch metaphor with Regulus blew me away. It was fantastic. As was the sheet with Lily.

I'm loving it so far. ;)

xCharli

Great chapters. Sorry about the late reveiw. I love the fact that your Regulus isn't weak. Looking forward to more.

Whew, you've been busy with updates recently! Sorry I didn't get round to this yesterday, but hey I'm here now so better late than never :).

James and Lily are so heartbreaking in this story! I love "Holding each other to the night - they were oceans apart". I'm assuming the he that can save Lily is Severus?

And wow, you're making me feel sorry for Petunia, and see her in a different light. I would've thought that was impossible, but apparently not. That last sentence of her section is just so sad though..

So Sev has a potion that can counteract the effect of Voldemort's? I'm glad, because I was actually thinking about this last night, and I was like "Ooh, I wonder who'll drink the potion in Admonition now that more people know about it, surely they wouldn't let Regulus throw his life away without a good fight?". So yay, coolness! And poor Sev, not realising that Lily needs him right now more than she needs James.

Oh, Fray.

I find it ironic how you wrote this for me, because you want me to be happy, and I cry all the way through it.

It's wonderful and beautiful and heart-wrenching. IT breaks my heart and I want to scream at all of them and it's so so so real.
Hurry up and write some more.

Love, Rye