You say this one has potential to be dark; I'm actually kind of looking forward to that. So far it's well written, with lots of possible outcomes. I like that. :D

(I already have a few theories of what could happen, based on events... And I highly look forward to the next update.

i now stalk you here AND on your d.a. account.

Typos/Errors

Ch. 1

-prank-filled week the most fun either had had in their entire life.-

Either replaced the first 'had' with 'have' or just get rid of one 'had'.

That's all I found in both chapters actully.

This seems intresting. I like the blog idea. Though Dib's 'fan' worries me for some reason.

To be honest, the promise of a 'dark' story is what drew me in. Those happen to be my favorite kind. Not to mention ZADR being my favorite pairing.

P.S. The title reminds me of a song.

-A crappy reviewer

this is an awsome story cant wait for the next chapters!

Again, an excellent chapter. I loved the ending.

And... No, Dib! What if your fan's a paedophile?!? Or Zim, for that matter...

Please update asap.

I love your writing style. Clear, concise and well-paced. You could use a little beta-ing, but then, so could anyone. Very nice, can't wait to read more.

That sounds pretty good. It was a little down beat, because not a whole lot was going on. Hopefully you can continue with some exciting things. I liked the opening. It had the push to it to keep you reading. I was thinking, 'what's in the box? Is it from Zim? Did he poison it?' But it turns out his life is kinda boring and there's not promise of something exciting.

Jamie

Ooh, this was a great introduction. Everything is so detailed and descriptive, so you can imagine everything you've put so easily.

The fact that it's going to get dark is tantalising... I can't wait to read more.

Ooh, this looks like a very interesting beginning so far! Knowing you, it'll gain more body as time goes on. Dark isn't a problem, being the writer of one or two dark stories I daren't post. Looking forward to seeing more of this and the emergence of the plot! Please update soon! ^^
--Tsurai