Very good!

You have to update soon.

Oh my goodness, im hooked :P i no its been ages since u updated, but please do ^.^ the completed story would defo add reviews. I think it could be nesseray to put rating to M, but dont take my word for it lol :D just in case. Cant wait for the next chapter(s) eagerly awaiting x

interesting way of developing the character of Ino and poor Chouji. Great job and good descriptions.

I could have sworn I wrote a review for this. Apparently I was lax in my duties. This is without a doubt one of the best hetero fics I have read to date, and I have enjoyed each update immensely. I think your characterization is spot on and I would look forward to any kind of update, though you aren't obligated to do such a thing, since I understand how real life often gets in the way of fandom. Thank you for writing what you have thusfar, it is a pleasure to read.

That. is intense! I'm all worked up now. Next chapter, yes?

"(since a four-year-old Ino had thought it funny to try and flush her father's hitai-ate down the toilet)"

Haha the image~

Your sexy skills work surprisingly well, haha..

Oh! Haha, poor Ino, so surprised.

Ino's attack was so scary *shudder* but it was cool to read, your ICness still amazes me.

Haha...bad ass...I love the arguing. It made me laugh.

I like it already~ Lots of Narrative...It's different

I'm really impressed with this story. I've always loved Chouji because of how very sweet he is. I like how both characters are taken seriously and given depth. Thanks for a great story, I can't wait to read more.

Wha?! What happened?! You can't leave it THERE!
This is gonna bother the heck out of me until the next chapter, so please hurry.

OH this is really really good. I hope chouji is ok! I love chouji!

OMG HOW CAN U DO THIS 2 ME i almost died lol sufficant to say this story is awsome lol choji is my favorite character and although i never really liked Ino i like this story lol but seriously you need to finish this before i die. Awsome story 10/10

Please continue, I like the way this story portrays Ino as more than a 'dumb blonde'. (I don't agree with that stereotyp, btw)