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| KyosBeads13 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful work. Sesshomaru was so well in character, perfect amount of dignity. I especially like the last line, wonderful job. --KB |
| forthright 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. Well told. |
| Kristen Sharpe 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very interesting piece. I've read a couple of similar stories involving Sesshoumaru visiting the sealed Inuyasha, but this one really sets itself apart. Especially with the last lines. I love your idea that Sesshoumaru wouldn't believe Inuyasha betrayed Kikyou because he sees Inuyasha as much like their father. Very interesting. And, your Sesshoumaru characterization is wonderfully spot-on. |