wow! So cute and poor Ari. I wanted to give her a hug at the end. The way she (you) liked the colours to the characters was really interesting.

This was fantastic! I love the way Ari linked colors to things, and the images as well. Just fantastic.

Keep Writing!

Wow... that's just sad. The way you have Ariana be so perceptive about the world and have her interaction with others completely screwed up is just heart-wrenching. I just love Ariana's character and all of your other Ariana-centric stories! Anyway, great job and keep up the amazing work!

Amazing, you can really feel Ariana's elation and frustration, and the colors you chose for each character reflect them so well...good work!

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Holy Harry-And-Draco. THAT is an amazing story. Just- whoa.

Touching. I say this in a dry tone with a ring of sincerity under it.

Gorgeous. I love your interpretation of Ariana.

Wow. Amazing. Great job.