I thought I'd give your Voltron stories a read because 1. I'm desperate for some KittyLynne updates ;) and 2. I remember Voltron from when it first showed on CN so I figured I wouldn't be too lost. I wasn't sure what to expect from this pairing so I started reading Bonds of Love before A Ray of Hope. I'm now gonna go and read AROH and this straight through. Whether its FY or Voltron or whatever, you are an amazing writer. Only four chapters into a fic of series I don't even ship and I'm hooked. I can tell this story is going to go far far beyond my expectations for what someone could do with an American hybrid cartoon. It has all the hallmarks of your FY fics; honest emotions, great humor, romantic tension and characters written to be real people. Keith and Allura are so different from Tasuki and Miaka, but no less passionate and sexy in their own way. And I love Lance!!

I think another book cover is in order.(Huggles and thank you for putting the Burned one on your bio page! ::happybounces::)
Tia-chan


I'm going to give a shout out to my buds about this story. You should be getting more reviews. (But if you don't come back to Fushigi!! We'll give ya some love! :D)

Good to see this chapter go up-you worked hard, and it shows, you continue to amaze me in outdoing yourself once again. Great job with merging chapters and edits. Dialogue has more polish and our daughter will be happy to know her reading Romeo and Juliet and her favorite character had influence on you. :-D

Now get to work on your other stuff ok? Tasuki needs to be with his woman. ;-D

yours,

The Bandit

Perhaps it won't be as extensive as your original, in the amount of chapters, I mean.

Did you know that they have Vehicle Voltron on DVD's? It follows after the last Lion Voltron. Now, here are the connections {if you didn't know already}

Keith, Lance, Sven and Jeff: Best friends known as the Four Musketeers

Pidge and Chip: brothers

Hunk and Rocky: Close friends

Lisa, Ginger, Cinda and Allura: Close friends who meet

I rarly think and say this about a fic but... You have to write more. Absolutly have to! There are practically no Allura-Keith fics and this one is GORGOUS! Love the incorporation of Lance. And the line about poster boys for obsession... Brilliant. I can't even find fault in your spelling! When will you write more?!

I loved this story. I hope you update soon! I like seeing how the relationship between Keith and Allura grows. Please keep up the writing! Also, I can totally see Lance acting this way (as a big brother teasing his little sister)!
Take care,
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Great story! I haven't read much in the Voltron fandom, but this is quite well written and I love the way you depict the characters and the relationships between them. The sexual tension between Keith and Allura is fantastic. I also love watching Keith's internal struggle - I get this feeling he's got so much repressed emotion that he'll explode soon! I hope to see more from you. I read earlier that you have actually finished this story - are you going to post it here unedited or are you editing it as you go along? Do you still have it posted elsewhere? (I am impatient!)

Lovely chapter. Good to see your writing again. ^_^ Well written and thoroughly enjoyable.

Hey there,
Don't really have much to say since we already talked about this over coffee. I don't think I told you that it's great how you pay attention to smaller details, like Hunk wanting to eat Allura's bath products and Keith having to use spell check. Those are the kind of things you do that make your characters real right off the bat.

Keep the fires burning. You're doing great. :-)

Yours always,
The Bandit

Now things are getting to be a tad more interesting. This is very good. Cannot wait for more tension, if ya get my meaning.

This was a totally satisfying installment-with a sense of anticipation from the very beginning-the pent up and frustrated feelings Keith was experiencing were vivid and I could easily believe his tumultuous state as duty wars with intense desire...
And Allura's own emotions are as intense-with the added burden of being the sovereign of a people, she's got a full plate-yet as a young girl, she is in the throes of her first love and is giddy and excited about it making her feel very much a woman...
The bathing scene was sweetly scintillating, with Hunk as her shy valet then Keith when duty called added the inevitable sexual tension that represents these two so well-and considering their separate trains of thought, both were close to breaching the self-imposed bounderies that they have built...hovever I sense the walls are beginning to crumble...
Thanks so much for yet another wonderfully absorbing read... and RedLion2 is gifting me with the first two box sets so I will be immersing myself into to universe to truly experience the Voltron world.
Great writing from a great writer.

Hi KittyLynne!!

Well...just where to begin? :-)

I loved the sweet and protective nature you instilled in Hunk. He's a real great guy in your portrayal. He's the type of muscle that is just brimming wth kindness and compassion. I absolutely enjoyed the interaction between him and the princess. Their scene was my favorite part of this chapter. Is it me or does there seem to be some comical(?) misunderstanding to come with a certain nightgown that is due for some mending?

Well, Hunk and the princess' sweetness certainly changed quite quickly when Keith showed up! ;-)

You are painting a very vivid portrait of tortured love...star-crossed lovers. It's beautiful, and for as much as you want that first kiss to happen, you enjoy the barrier that remains between them, holding it off for just a bit longer.

Looking forward to the next update! Again, I must note that I have not read your original version as I want to thoroughly enjoy this revised and updated one instead.

See you in the next update! :-)

Methinks Keith is fighting a losing battle! (but in this case, its one we want him to lose, lolz!) Bonds of Love and your writing both rock! Keep up the great work!

--purple lion

I read this story on 'The Lion's Keep' and devoured it in two days. I have been hesitant to read the sequel since I couldn't see that it was being updated. I am so thrilled to see you posting it here. I still may wait to read the sequel, but I look forward to future chapters and any changes that have been made. Keep up the great work!

I fell across this story by accident one Sunday morning. I was really impressed by the Prologue. The imagery and the beauty of the unknown Arusian past really intrigued me. I don't entirely know where the story will go from here, but I'd like to keep reading.

My only personal issue is that it seems everyone paints Lance as such a cad. Yes, I know he's supposed to be the joking-aggressor of the group, but for as humorous as you've made him, I have a hard time with seeing him as such a cruel character.

Anyway, I just wanted you to know that the story itself is fantastic, the imagery is beautiful, and the emotional aspects really have drawn me into the story. I look forward to the next chapter! :-)