I think this is good so far! You have Aramis and Porthos down pat, lol. I wish you posted more!

God, I enjoyed your story! Love those four chapters so far. I hope you'll post other chapters soon.

You excellently portray what I always think the musketeers to be; I am anticipating the next chapter. Please update!

your title is right except for one thing. It should be: La Cinquième Lame. 'a' instead of 'e' in 'la' and there should be a little dash thingy above that first 'e' in cinquieme. i never took french, but i've got a great online translator: worldlingo. you should check it out. it's so easy!

i'm so happy! someone who has both read the book and seen the movie, combining things from both. i love it! no one does that! most people just follow the movie and say 'screw the book'.

aramis is my favorite, too! especially jeremey irons as aramis! so i'm very happy that there'll be a lot of him, since a lot of people don't really both with him.

UPDATE SOON!

ps: athos is played by kiefer sutherland. love him, too! XD

Oh, I'm absolutely loving it so far. You got the characterization of the four of them down pat. Hope to see more soon!

Somehow, I think that Aramis has seen through her 'lie'. In a way she HAS told the truth - she has turned herself into her own twin. Update soon!

I'm amused that they think that he can see into women's minds - I wouldn't be surprised if they start coming to 'Andre' for advice on their love lives. They can learn a lot from each other as long as her disguise is maintained. Update soon!

good work!

Very interesting beginning! Update soon!

Oh, very definite possibilities. Please keep up the GREAT work.

Pern