My god, this is one of the best fics I've read in months, and undoubtedly the best of FranAshe.

The last two sentences were perfect, the sybolism was beautiful, the angst heartbreaking. Sequel would be nice, though it's perfect the way it is.

I love how you don't know what "altruistic" means.

Right. Liked it. I won't say loved it, since I don't like Final Fantasy and never will, but I liked it. So . . . yay.

Wonderfully written.

absolutely beautifully written.
not every day you see and ashexfran. its a shame, too, cause its so sexy.
Great work, I love your stories