LOL This is excellent and very original ! :D

I so wished someone could write more about Aldos Othran's song on cliffracers: "Flyin'... flyyin' in the sky... cliff racer flys so high... flyin'..." XD

I don't know the tunes to these songs, so I really can't say much. I like the contraction "and'll" though. Improvising contractions is fun. Anyway, I don't know what your songs are on about at some points, but that's all I'll say.

P.S. Advice and suggestions are the same thing methinks.

What do you need pitchforks for? To make a song regarding Shrek and maybe a few vampires? lol, I thought your little songs were ok, but you are right when you say that they need work! Unfortunately I don't know much about songwriting... Keep it up!