I cannot stop reading this story its amazing.. i finally figured i should write a review on how great your writing is!

please keep writing and spreadin the love..
the kicker is at the end with the humor mixed in all this hot and heaviness.

Teehee, that was hysterical! And hot.

ah..what a dream*sigh*. Lovely smut

I loved it, it was very sexy ;)

As long as you stick with the M rating, you'd be amazed what you can get away with on this site. If not, there's always the adultfanfiction(dot)net which is smut central. Very lovely and I'm certainly looking forward to the next one.

hehehe the part in the kitchen is funny.