Very well-written, oh how I wish it was longer! You really captured the nuances of how Candy and Carrion relate...amazing, and a joy to read.

so is there going to be a pairing int his fic? I would like to know if their is going to be. I am liking this fic so far though...

Omg I Love This Pairing and Story!

THAT'S IT? That was very good! I could have sworn Candy ws really at night and not having a nightmare! I really like Carrion's "outbreak" after Candy tells him that she hates him...nice...I also like what he says without realzing it. I like the ending a lot... because it was very unexpected-you should write a seqeul to this chapter!

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Love it ! I'm so sad it's already "complete", though...