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Reviews for: Destiny Origins
Teraunce
2008-11-12 . chapter 1
nice sidestory. 10/10
Keyblade Master of Promise
2008-01-11 . chapter 1
This was funny lol. I really enjoyed reading this, nicely done :D. Lemme know when you update :p
~KBMP
LordApocolypse-End of Days.
2008-01-05 . chapter 1
porgon,porgon2 and porygon Z were made by humans...
Dimunda Giratina God
2007-10-03 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT! THIS IS REALLY GOOD! HOPE YOU WILL MAKE SOMETHING ELSE LIKE THIS!
buffalomikem
2007-09-27 . chapter 1
First of all Pokemon did not create the world God did and sceond of all why are the pokemon talking. Pokemon do not talk and third of all why only 1 chapter. I don't like this story, sorry, but read my fan fic you will find them much more interesting.
Espeon Master
2007-09-15 . chapter 1
Great story! The ending was really amusing as well.

P.S. My next chapter SHOULD be completed some time today...unfortunately boarding school can plan things to mess up your schedule...
Antithesis
2007-09-14 . chapter 1
Interesting. It's not the best, especially with the battle scenes, but I've read much worse. I like the way it starts out. It feels particularly like an old myth handed down from generation to... you get the idea. The problem is that the dialog between the legendaries (especially in the battle scenes toward the end) feels too modern compared to the rest of the story. Having the master of all legendaries use the phrase "screw up" just doesn't seem to fit. But anyway, nice job, keep writing, and keep improving!
swack16
2007-09-14 . chapter 1
Nice side story I'm sure Espeon Master will like it. maybe you should write another side story of how Ryan from Tough Love did in Kanto before the incident with Team Rocket that change him into a Dragonite Hybrid.
Kefka VI
2007-09-14 . chapter 1
The Dread Plate makes Arceus immune to psychic attacks
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