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| Bishop T 2007-09-16 ch 6, | abuseWow! Triplets! Boy oh boy, this is going to be interesting! Terry |
| Bishop T 2007-09-16 ch 5, | abuseIts about time someone put Janine in her place. If they didn't she could spend her whole life being self centered. I hope she grows in a positive way from this. Terry |
| Bishop T 2007-09-16 ch 4, | abuseYour story is developing quite nicely. It will be very interesting to see how things turn out. Terry |
| Bishop T 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseAn interseting start. New fathers-to-be usually are over protective but it is also true that it is out of love and concern. I'm glad that Jeremy got the job. Hopefully it will grow into full time work or prepare him for something even better. His moving into his sister's basement should be interesting too. LOL! Terry |
| Harry2 2007-09-15 ch 6, | abuse*Jaw hits floor* TRIPLETS! Lords of Light, TRIPLETS! I am having a hard time imagining Christian and Leslie dealing with THREE little ones! And Roarke. . . This is going to be one of those times that even Roarke is going to be surprised! |
| Harry2 2007-09-15 ch 5, | abuseJanine, its ABOUT TIME someone told you off! You've been acting like a spoiled brat, and its time someone told you off and made you realize just WHAT you are doing! I hope that it sinks in! |
| Harry2 2007-09-15 ch 4, | abuseWell, it looks like Jeremy has gotten his out as a judge. Now, lets see if things work out for him, and his niece. |
| Harry2 2007-09-15 ch 3, | abuseWell, it looks like Jeremy has a bit of a dilemma on his hands! Now, how is he going to settle it? |
| Harry2 2007-09-15 ch 2, | abuseWell, I can understand why the mother is upset, but to not explain it to the kids is not smart! And Leslie: I think your friend was half joking about the test! |
| Harry2 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abuseWell, it sounds like things are going nicely. We have a young man who is trying to do what is right, despite the lack of major money. And Christian, TRY to relax! If anything major went wrong, either Leslie or Roarke would contact you. |
| PDXWiz 2007-09-15 ch 6, | abuseTotally amazing. First Christian knocks Nordeman down a peg or two, gaining instant respect from his potential future brother-in-law... "Nordeman nodded, studying the former prince, as if taking his measure; Christian continued to return his scrutiny with cool, quiet self-confidence. Suddenly the older man let out a laugh. “Must be something about this island,” he said. “I couldn’t intimidate Roarke when I got here. Now I can’t intimidate you.” “He still has the soul of a prince,” Leslie said with a fond smile at her husband, “and he puts it to good use when he needs to. Nobody steamrollers over Christian.”" Good stuff there... And further on... TRIPLETS? OY VEY TO THE INFINITE POWER! This I can't wait to see! Who will come to help them in their hour of need? And what will happen with this actor she likes? And you are most welcome for the naming suggestion... :) Gordon |
| PDXWiz 2007-09-15 ch 5, | abuseWow, more unexpected development...well done. Holly resigns from the band, to not lose Jeremy, after Jeremy resigns from the judging, not to lose her. And then the band wins, and Holly and Jeremy win each other. Very cool. They should be getting married right after she graduates from school and gets hired at the hospital. Anton really, and I mean REALLY, opened up. He's a very good guy. I like him. He and Andrea would...WILL be...good for each other. I suspect he probably hasn't had ANY dates since his divorce, until now. Just threw himself into his work...I did that for a few years myself. It was also very interesting to see the European perception of Christian, through Anton's conversation with Andrea. I agree with Anton: his kids would probably not want to leave FI, if they came to visit. I wish they would come to visit...On the other hand...nope, I can't see Andrea marrying him and moving to Germany. Marrying him, yes, and Denise would like him--he'd be a great step-dad. Gawd, Janine, what a beech you are! Way to sock it to her, Denise! She deserved that proverbial belt right across the chops from you, and the one from Jeremy as well... Great development of characters with Anton and Andrea, and great dialogue at the end between Andrea, Jeremy, Denise, and Janine. Maybe Janine will get her head out of her butt now... Gordon |
| PDXWiz 2007-09-15 ch 4, | abuseHooray! Andrea found a mattress! Yes, the Pacific is a much better ocean to live in or along than the Atlantic... hehehe Hooray! Anton asked her out, Anton asked her out... More pc problems at the paper... Oh, he's pretty grumpy, eh? OMG he proposed to her? She's doing the right thing by returning to LJ now...I wonder how quickly he'll turn up at the castle in Sundborg...Roald might actually be happy to see, after discovering he's missed her. Lunchus interruptus, I'm sorry to say... Hm. He found Janine to do his dirty work? I mean judge? Could be interesting. Okay, perhaps Janine or Denise could help with the twins. Besides, Janine could talk about New England with Leslie, since they were both born there. More neat happenings. Onto 5! Gordon |
| PDXWiz 2007-09-15 ch 3, | abuseHm...interesting dilemma for Anna-Laura. They are right--as a princess, it would be improper...and Roald would go off on her pretty bad. Glad to see his program is working out so well, both on FI and back home on LJ. Mygosh! Lauren was in labor for HOURS! Just like when my son was born... Kevin Anthony Knight? Cool name...but those initials...KAK... oh well lol Yah! The babies are moving! And Christian felt it! Oh, it's so neat! Hey cool. When Anna-Laura was telling Christian and Leslie about the differences in how Ceci and Roald kicked, she laughed softly...she wasn't crying about the loss of her daughter...neat. Hmm...I am picturing Leslie bringing the twins to work and doing light, office work after they are born. And I am picturing Roarke, beaming happily away at his grandkids. I'm very happy for the chance Jeremy has with Holly, romantically...but very sad about the judging contest. I hope this all works out. Maybe he'll wind up being their manager? Or her manager-husband? It happens a lot! But on the other hand, she's going to be an RN. That's a pretty good job, and she can probably get a job on the island very easily (so they could get married). Nice history for the quads, especially how they tried to be each other. Good luck to Jeremy as he makes his decision, and as he prepares to judge the contest... Good luck to Andrea on her bed-shopping expedition! I know how bad old mattresses can be, I had a killer bad one up until this summer...Now I can actually sleep at night... WOW! Andrea IS interested in Anton! And he's very much into family (he goes home every year...) Great chapter, and busy, too! Gordon |
| jtbwriter 2007-09-15 ch 6, | abuseWow...that was a great story! I love how Jeremy found someone for himself, and a job he loves to boot! And how Anna- Laura's "Beau" got taken to the woodshed by Christian. But...Janine sounds like a project-and wait until the girls here of her past...what a story! But...triplets? Poor Leslie and Christian are going to be so stretched. But it couldn't happen to two more loving and patient people! Thanks for keeping them real-and believable But the teaser...I can hardly wait! Thanks! |